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Re: A Lesson In Love
I really liked the story of this poem, and the lesson at the end is just beautifully worded. However, and I don't mean this to sound too harsh, I think ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: I Wish I Could Tell You
I loved this! Honestly, I didn't expect to because I'm not a fan of animals-speaking-as-humans, but this was so simple and heartfelt and genuine. It was never strained or strange. ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: a little dream in abstract
I really enjoyed this. It may not be perfect but I feel like that was kind of the point you were trying to make. It's dreams, and dreams don't make ...
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: In your eyes
I liked this a lot. It really got into the head of a frightened and worried parent and also manages to strike fear into the heart of the reader, for ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Fall Of Man
Hmm. Great imagery. But I didn't know what you were getting at here. I didn't know what you wanted to say. A zombie massacre? It's unclear. But one thing is ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Re-Imagining Your Image
I LOVED this. It was so dramatic, so powerful and poignant. I like the imagery and the symbolism and the fact that it was a bit arcane--it made it more ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: on my bicycle
I loved this poem. I loved the symbolism (if indeed that is what you were going for) of the bicyclist not fitting into any clear-cut category. I also like how ...
Nov 27, 2008
